Brother Game: Chapter 14
"I can't," she said to him. "I can't let you go."He was so afraid she knew then. That by some miracle of wife knowledge she knew. That she had read the wrongness in him and knew what he...
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Dear Heath and his modesty. Dr Merar is a favourite character of mine. He's always so caring and manages to get the job done when called upon.
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I suppose it's a good thing that, this one time, Nick let his fists do the talking for him. Otherwise Heath would probably be off by himself somewhere dying of his infection. Poor baby!
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Your Heath has had a rough past. He's going to need a lot of mental healing as well. I hope it wasn't Nick who broke his ribs. I don't know what he can do to right the wrong, but I'm sure he'll try.
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Great post in this story. Lots of serious stuff of course but couldn't help but laugh at this line: Didn't even need to look to know that ‘woman angry at a man she can't buffalo' look.I can just see...
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I really loved this chapter. Poor Heath, he really doesn't stand a chance against all of the Barkleys. He seems so lost and embarrassed but yet you can tell he really wants this family but to him they...
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Just listening to the sound of their voices, the feeling of their being there. That sentence just clutched at my heart. You have a wonderful economical yet rich way of expressing Heath's deepest...
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You sure are good at pain, aren't ya? Riveting reading. Another great chapter.
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this was the brother from the Brother Game. This was the tone a big brother would take, bullying a little brother to his face and watching out for him with all others. But this was not the Brother...
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Very compelling post. I could picture Victoria's frustration and Heath's desperation to keep some measure of pride while combatting the pain/ shame/ longing he was enduring.So much kindness from...
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With his presence, Heath is afraid to give pain to his family. Perhaps his fever will talk to them.
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